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Julian ([personal profile] shouei) wrote2008-09-23 11:28 pm

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For [ profile] botling. Don't let it get to you, bb. We still love you and always will ♥

Title: Distraction
Series: Bakuman
Pairing: Shujin/Saiko
Rating: NC-17
Prompt: Pens
Word Count: 458

Saiko watched, brows screwing and his mouth hanging open in a dark scowl. He watched as his uncle's pens that were so neatly placed in that pen holder now scattered on the floor, dry ink splattering the tatami in dark tiny flakes.  

And he watched as Shujin twisted the handle, fingers darkened by ink and he looked absolutely absorbed, fascinated in the act and Saiko gritted his teeth, head rolling back against the floor when that tip brushed against that spot. And his legs shook against Shujin's hold, his fingers tugged harder against light brown locks and he flushed.  

How the hell did they get into this situation anyway? 

"Does that feel good?" Shujin asked him, eyes wide and glinting in a dorkish excitement and Saiko could only glare, a corner of his mouth twitching lopsidedly. What could he say? Admitting that it felt good was hard, because Shujin didn't act as if this was not sex, that jerk didn't act like he hadn't just shoved a pen up Saiko's ass, and that jerk seemed to think that this was all an experiment. 

On the other hand, what else could it be, aside from an experiment? Saiko was going to get married with Azuki, so there was no way there could be any feelings between him and Shujin. Absolutely not. Plus, he wouldn't even look at the guy in that way. It was just wrong. 

But Shujin was pushing the pen deeper inside now and Saiko forced down a moan, biting his bottom lip and his legs spasmed. He could feel sweat collecting at the back of his neck and he could feel the tatami pattern etching into his skin and he wanted it to stop. He wanted Shujin to stop this torture but he couldn't bring himself to say so because it felt too damn good. Goddamn Shujin and his talents. Goddamn Shujin and his obliviousness. Goddamn Saiko for being a teenager.  

Goddamn it all.  

And he came with a strained cry, body arching off the floor and he pulled at Shujin's hair with a vicious jerk. Revenge, perhaps, but Saiko's mind was already gone and his lips hung open, eyes glazed and his muscles pliant.  

"Wow," he heard Shujin whisper, and he felt the other's hand on his chest, fingers brushing against the mess on his abdomen and he wanted to cringe in disgust.

As if on cue, Shujin made a face; and Saiko rolled his eyes.

“Get back to the name, Shujin.” He sighed, wiping the drying semen off with a towel and Shujin pouted.

And Saiko felt an odd sense of triumph, for he could look at the strain on Shujin’s pants and know that he was not going to return the favor.

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 04:43 am (UTC)(link)
lkjsdf Somuchlove, Linh ♥ somuchlove.

lakjsf saiko, so tsundereee~

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 04:48 am (UTC)(link)

:<< This is fail!porn though.

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 04:50 am (UTC)(link)
♥ ♥ ♥

>: Is not.

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 04:51 am (UTC)(link)

Need Shujin icons :<

And is too >:

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 04:54 am (UTC)(link)

>>: Does! Does! *needs to upload more Saiko ones, too*

>: Is not xinfinity

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 04:55 am (UTC)(link)

:< Need to make better Shujin icons. And recolor the RP icons. OTL.

:< Is too x infinity + 18924751890263059182630512683501285


[identity profile] 2008-09-24 05:04 am (UTC)(link)

XDD Oh, Linh-bb. We should get them in a less serious game sometime, too. So they can spazz properly. X3

.... *tops* D|

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 05:10 am (UTC)(link)

We should D: ... [eyes Toujours]... That place is cracky enough...

[bottoms willingly] |D

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 05:12 am (UTC)(link)

X3 Toujours or Poly? *i- is probably apping one or the other at Poly either way at this rate*

*tops* *sexually* :3

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 04:59 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 05:01 am (UTC)(link)

as;ldgkhasf First time writing Bakuman :<<< Probably OOC and all that jazz.

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 05:29 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] 2008-09-24 01:55 pm (UTC)(link)
SJIELJSLIEJKD omg *_____* NOT JUST BAKUMAN FIC BUT BAKUMAN PROOOONZ XDDDD \o/ WRITE MOAR!!! I adore Shujin to itty bitty bits *__* MMMMMM <3

[identity profile] 2008-09-29 01:18 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] 2008-09-29 04:11 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] 2008-09-29 04:23 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] 2008-09-29 04:38 am (UTC)(link)
A winnar are you. ♥
♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ And what the hell are you talking about, this is not-fail. Ever. ):

[identity profile] 2008-09-29 09:38 pm (UTC)(link)
I- It fails ;A; a;lskdghsdf I'm not very good at writing porn orz.

[identity profile] 2008-09-29 04:59 am (UTC)(link)
Not OOC at all! And the ending... Haha, Saiko, you bastard. |D

[identity profile] 2008-09-29 06:25 am (UTC)(link)
PORN IS GOOD. VERY GOOD. <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

[identity profile] 2008-09-29 01:46 pm (UTC)(link)

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[identity profile] 2008-09-29 09:34 pm (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] 2008-09-29 08:29 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! Porn!
I love the ending. Mean, mean Saiko. But I think you captured their relationship very well.

[identity profile] 2008-09-29 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Ahahaha XD; Thank you ♥ I'm glad you think so~


[identity profile] 2008-09-30 03:33 am (UTC)(link)

[identity profile] 2008-10-01 03:37 pm (UTC)(link)
that was so hawt!!

[identity profile] 2008-10-01 10:32 pm (UTC)(link)
I was wanting to say something coherent but... asdfghjkl... D:

Hope to read more from you. :D

[identity profile] 2008-10-12 07:51 am (UTC)(link)
Mmmm, Bakuman porn. Tis a beautiful thing.

[identity profile] 2008-10-19 10:01 pm (UTC)(link)
alpdfkjas :| ♥

[identity profile] 2008-10-30 12:37 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. To be honest, as the first pron fic in the fandom (at least that I'm aware of...), I expected it to be really really bad. I am quite pleasantly surprised. It's not blatantly explicit and not excessively romanticized either. It's just what it is, Shujin and Saiko 'experimenting', albeit with an undercurrent of something else. There's also something attractive about your writing.

The ending is also love and so IC <333

[identity profile] 2008-11-07 06:58 pm (UTC)(link)
mm thank you! i've been anxiously searching for some bakuman lemon. :)

[identity profile] 2008-12-08 02:50 am (UTC)(link)